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Are these sentences grammatically correct?
”A couple years ago, a plane that belonged to the American air force was flying above the pacific ocean. Whilst it was up there, they discovered a man amongst the clouds. None of the pilots had a clue as to what had happened to him, but, what he had done was- He had strapped a large quantity of helium baloons to his legs and then he flew amongst the clouds and froze to death.”
Ok as American English, except for the punctuation and capitalisation.
Air Force and Pacific Ocean need capitals.
No comma after ‘but’.
No capital after ‘was’.
Comma or colon after ‘was’ rather than dash.
Helium balloon cluster Launch – Pilot John Ninomiya
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